The last in-class workshop was absolutely great! Not that I didn’t know how to use sources and incorporate them in research papers, but your detail analysis was very constructive. I used to think that repetitive sentences make an essay look bad, but now I have a much clearer idea about how to repeat or better said “restate” the same thought using slightly different vocabulary.
On a plus side, I don’t think after that class that anyone can come up to you and say that they don’t know how to find or use research material.
You made it simple, easy, and clear!
I honestly have only positive criticism about it!